– Lead paragraph (p)
– Follow-up (p)
– blockquote with cite
– community reaction/technical context (p)
– h2 “Looking Ahead” + p
Actually, since this is based on a review, I can frame it as “Kotaku’s review finds…” which allows me to report the critical assessment journalistically.
Let me make it punchy but professional.
Then subheadings for gameplay, story, critique, visuals/Labyrinth, looking ahead.
I need to integrate quotes. The review has some good quotable lines but they’re mostly my own paraphrase material since there aren’t direct developer quotes in this input except the “back-of-the-box” critic notes. Let me look… There’s no actual developer quote provided. I have the critic’s “liked/disliked” and back-of-the-box quotes which are really just review summary points, not developer quotes.
Hmm, so I don’t have a genuine developer/publisher quote to put in the blockquote format. The template suggests using
with a speaker/studio cite.
I could use one of the critic’s memorable lines as a pull quote and attribute it appropriately (e.g., Kotaku reviewer). That would work journalistically – attributing the review’s assessment to the publication/reviewer.
Actually, I need to be careful – fabricating quotes is bad journalism. But these are paraphrases of what was written. The “back-of-the-box” notes ARE actual text from the review (the liked section). So I can use those as they’re genuine excerpts:
– “Dealing punishment with newfound Cenobite powers is a hoot, impressive visuals especially within the Labyrinth, actually getting to solve the puzzle box, lots of quality time with our boy Chatterer.”
I could attribute this to Kotaku’s review. That’s fair since it’s their words. Let me use a cleaner excerpt.
Draft:
“Hellraiser: Revival Review: A Maximalist Feast of Flesh and Punishment That Stumbles in Its Gunplay”
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